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poems and things in between the suds and the goldfish

Back to the bones: Section #3-The Spine November 10, 2009

If you’ve arrived here looking for a review of Mister Skylight, click here. If you’re here to read my latest skeleton poem, ala Read. Write. Poem.’s  5-Section Poem Mini-Challenge, read on. If you’ve happened by to sell me a vaccuum cleaner, please read blog description–I am writing between the suds, the goldfish AND the dust bunnies–they are my inspiration, receiving complete amnesty in my home!

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So This is Her Secret

 

skeleton made of diamonds
each clavicle a string of hard glass
each rib a glittering mirror
illuminating the mess inside.

She invites all of her bones to roost
in her lungs—blood balloons—guests
better suited to plusher rooms, downy pillows.

Without red, there is no point in painting
says the artist, watching the sunset bleed
bordeaux, tang of iron rusting the tongue.

 

When she was young she drew skeletons
even after Halloween. Stick-limbed neighbors
she left her papers in the rain, watched
from her window as the women swept the sidewalks.

When your bones are made of glass
the house you live in should be soft,
your friends and lovers flexible as marrow.

 

Ed Skoog’s “Mister Skylight” – Man the Lifeboats November 8, 2009

mister-skylight

Welcome to the latest stop on Read. Write. Poem.’s Virtual Book Tour! To read more reviews of this ambitious debut collection, please visit the Book Tour Schedule.   Like what you see and want to read more of Skoog’s work? Visit his blog or Copper Canyon Press and purchase your very own copy!

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Life must be worth something/ for the loss of it to hurt so much.

 

This is the simple truth that the poems in Ed Skoog’s new collection, Mister Skylight, are built upon. Again and again, through flood, hurricane and wildfire, through the daily bewilderment of life’s uncertainties, there is the certainty of wreckage, that “Sunset ripens and ruptures,” that “If you were delicious, [cormorants] would dive after you/ with powerful small webbed feet or leave only a feather.”

The phrase “Mister Skylight” is an emergency signal to alert a ship’s crew, but not its passengers, of an emergency. To read this debut collection is to be at once the ship’s crew—alert to impending tragedy, and its passengers—utterly unaware. As Skoog said in a recent interview with Dave Jarecki,

“The ship is at its end. But the warning comes without wanting to alarm the passengers. It’s a warning for the crew to start readying the lifeboats, or to start preparing for abandoning the ship so it could get done in an orderly process…That was probably the scariest thing I’d ever read for some reason, not just the phrase but the thought of being a survivor, or temporary survivor, and to hear that sort of warning…”

 

As the first line of this title poem intones, “When you enter the city of riots, confess/ what turns your life has taken.” Throughout the book, Skoog is confessing, though his work is far from what some critics call confessional. Instead, “It is like the enormity Gregor Samsa/ is hoping to sleep through, but, well, can’t.” It is impossible to ignore the man-size cockroach in the room, or, in Skoog’s world, the ocean opening “Grand Isle like a casket,” or “…next week’s water/ writing its black line across plaster.”

In this way, each poem takes on a narrative cast, alluding to the universal in all of our myriad sufferings. With little effort, readers will doubtless see themselves in such carefully wrought lines as, “Who’s not tired of choosing between/ invisibility and flight?” Will say yes when invited to consider, “Is it sufficient to believe in dirt?” for as the narrator reminds us:

The mind will join eventually with sod,
merging memory of a lovely kiss with dirt
and its caress; the hands I wash dirt
from will become cleansed of hands.

 

Trust in Mr. Skylight, personified alarm, and view through Skoog’s clear eyes the humanity surrounding each of us, if only we were alert enough to see it, if only we had our own “Mr. Skylight” counsel:

The problems of language are mostly solved

in the fish’s gutting on the public sink, and thrown to sea
lions by the old woman with fierce embarrassment for a hat.

A girl staring at a croaker cut in half
runs to daddy. She reminds me that terror

has a place here, in the beginning, among strange messages.

 

 

Sometimes, like the very tragedies he is recording, Skoog’s images are difficult to interpret. In “Party at the Dump,” it is clear a storm has come through. “What can’t be seen under the thrown/ was home.” In the closing lines, however, a beautiful debris of language works in disarray:

When the wind turns along the fence, when the gray
horse rounds the turn, blue arguments gnarl
podiums of sky. Wind kneels in August februation
The boy with the web painted on his face
pursues his thoughts through the vineyard.

 

 

Much like survivors returning to the ruin that is their home, we are forced to look again, read again, and strive to make meaning of what doesn’t lend itself to simplicity. Such is the nature of tragedy. Such is the nature of trying to understand someone else’s emotions. Always, always, however, the raw feeling is present.

I’ve had enough. I/ know she means she also doesn’t know/ what secret sent every quarter/ down Markey’s jukebox.” So begins the poem “Ruler of My Heart,” and if you didn’t know better, didn’t know the history of post-Katrina New Orleans and its people’s tenacious rebound from tragedy, you might conclude the poem was simply giving voice to a maudlin narrator, some guy sitting at the bar drowning his sorrows.

But Irma Thomas—Soul Queen of New Orleans—, and the singer in question, is a survivor. Though Katrina left both her home and night club underwater, Thomas didn’t falter, moving 60 miles away for a very short time before returning to The Big Easy and achieving great success. Likewise, Skoog’s poems resist the temptation to flounder in melancholy, resist utter despair in favor of a savage and conscious honesty.

Just as the birth of the blues gave suffering not only a voice but a swift kick, so the poetry in this powerful collection is born of what Skoog calls “the heartbreaking impulse…the lyric impulse to respond internally and to want to communicate that with somebody.” Tune your ear to Mister Skylight’s mournful wail. As you surrender to your own impulse, one truth will resound—though this life may be melancholy, it is never, never without beauty. It just takes a poet’s eye (and voice) to reveal it. “You hear it. You do not hear it.” Your choice.

 

The bones…still speaking November 7, 2009

At the Funeral for the Three-Legged Cat

 

bones are bent to fit the grave

 

……….the cracking
only the heavy bag
protecting her body from scavengers
……….the snapping
only packing tape securing a red striped baby

 

blanket—death as gift
wrapped package.
Remember your manners
……………….Hands out (metacarpals flexed)
accept (with grace, with grace)
……………..the veterinarian’s rectangle remembrance—

you are given …..only…… as much as you can handle.

 

What did the mother say
when handed a flag that is not a flag?
…………..inflexible triangle?
What has three sides?
………….red white blue
Who’s hiding behind that blanket?
O joy………..bringing home baby.

 

Where to put the bundle?

 

The grown-ups argue dirt
depth, width, the wisdom of custom.
Tree roots (impossible ligaments) bleed sap by flashlight 
ax swinging once for every fine bone–

 

trio of tibia tucked
beneath their respective femur
feline backbone …………curving to fit the hole.

 

By morning the fresh brown soil
has dried to gold. A single crow
stands at attention on the stump of log
marking last night’s grave.

 

The search for what shines
limps on.

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The 2nd section of my 5-section poem (in progress!).  This poem is tricky.  It is not saying what I want it to say, not showing what I want it to show.

 

Cup your ear, listen to my bones November 3, 2009

Speaking of Skeletons

of bones strung on melancholy wire
of sunlight streaming …wanwanton light through wooden slats
of last night’s lives …………..lined up like bleached soldiers
of soldiers falling asleep …..holding their own.

Hold your own and see how you’ve grown
finger each metatarsal
until you can play Ode to Joy by ear.

Within ivory bone……..fluid-filled hollows

Out of the grave
out of the shallow
waters, dry as dust
when left in the sun.

Remember the painting
(still a blank canvas)
the cow skull pried from old farm land
left to air in a fallow garden
corn husks falling like shed skin
until the morning you reached
out to rinse it clean

cool spray blasting the bones to slivers.

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Poem #1 for Read. Write. Poem.’s   5-section mini-challenge. Take that, flu! I wrote a poem!

* Please note, no children were played with/tended to during the creation of this poem. There will now be consequences…

 

Halloween Skeleton (Poem) October 31, 2009

Today is a shred of fallen bark. The birds today are slow winged and thick-boned, prone to worm wringing on lawns or stealing seed pods to pad infested nests. For this reason, after rising take a feather pillow to offer the roosting pigeons who will want to harmonize in their thanks. This way you will be able to hollow a bone with precision. Feathers have little reason to do good deeds. Pinfeathers may need to sharpen dull edges with knife blades. This afternoon there is migration of exotics to observe record or join with wings of fallen travelers. Enjoy carving the hollows you could have in all the chasms you think must be filled to love. Use an awl and channel an owl of the type barns might have. This is a spell to cast and change lives.

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This is a skeleton poem* (see skeleton below), a poem created mad-libs style from a horoscope with its meatiest words chopped out. I saw this on Mutating the Signature. Nathan had pasted a link on his facebook page and I borrowed it! Since I’ve been fighting the valient flu fight (my poor children!) all week, I haven’t written a thing! Nothing! This sparked something, and for that I am grateful!

Today is a ____ of ______ _______. The ________ today are _____ _____ and ___ __ __________ to ___ _______ on _________ or _____ __ ___________ to _______ ____ ______. For this reason, ____ _____ take a ______ ____ to ______ the ____ ____ ___ will want to ____ in ____ ______. This way ___ will be able to ______ a _______ with __________. ____ have __ ___________ to do ____ ___. ___ may need to ___________ ____ ____ ____ ________ _______. This afternoon there is ____ of ___________ to _______ _______ or _______ _______ ____ of ____ _______. Enjoy _______ the ___________ ___ could have in all the _______ ___ think ___ _____ ____ to _____. Use a(n) _____ and ____ ____ ____ of the _____ ___ might have. This is a ____ to _____ and ____ ________.

 

Protected: Final Body Poem…the monster is complete October 16, 2009

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Body Poem #6 (You knew the cats were coming, right?) October 15, 2009

IMG_0397The Wife Breaks Her Appointment at the Day Spa

 

The black cat shadows me.
Of my own free will, I watch
the breath lift his fur, replace.

I draw a ragged breath
imagine legions of black hairs
stroking my lungs.

He sleeps with his head
soft world
on my wrist–gentle restraint. Who is waving?

I curse my dense bones
dream my diaphragm a knife
thrusting claws through my fingertips.

The air hums with his sleep (little death)
my ribs ache from vibration
fluttering inside. We are wreathed in birds.

A sparrow knocks
against the window (one gold eye open)
it’s feathers stick to my tongue

like snowflakes, melt into breakfast.

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Notes:  This is not nearly as dark as I would prefer.  Much like the kitten picture doesn’t reflect his size today.  I think the title is wrong.  Definitely a first draft.

 

Protected: Body Poem #5 (with poem #4 on the editing block) October 14, 2009

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Spreading My Writing Wings October 13, 2009

I am oh so proud to say I have two new pieces of writing (an interview & a review) in a glorious new online journal: Poets’ Quarterly. Editor Lori A. May has done a fabulous job with this inaugural issue. Please check it out! Don’t miss the two reviews by my best poetry pal and partner-in-crime Carolee Sherwood!

Interviewing poet Kara Candito was so much fun! I can’t wait for my next poet interview. In the meantime, I’m working on an interview with novelist Vince Zandri–he’s the man–so I’m a little nervous about getting this one just right! So, what would you want to ask a novelist/punk rocker/travel writer?

I interviewed Vince ages ago, when he was a first-timer and I was a starry-eyed kid with a graduate degree and no paying job in sight (I got paid for my book reviews in the best currency going–free books!) Now he has more writing credits & novels than I can keep track of and I’m still starry-eyed.

I love this writing life!

Oh, yeah!  Some more good news!  I have a poem forthcoming in the new issue of Wicked Alice!

 

Body Poem #3 (with poem #2 reposing in my journal) October 9, 2009

Mother Walking Home Alone

 

The suburbs are not dangerous.
……..You will not stub your toe on chemicals
spread to keep the neighbors in your yard.

 

The man with the black umbrella
trench coat swaying in a rainy breeze
will not wrap his chilled fingers (left his gloves on the counter)
around your neck ……….without gloves and cover of darkness.

 

Home is not far.

 

It is only dusk ………..(a light in every window)
evening hasn’t even opened
it’s blue-black eyes.
You are only alone
……………..in your thoughts.

 

There, behind the curtain
another mother …….brandishing a wooden spoon
splintered weapon ………slated for burial
after bedtime in the compost pile.

 

Not far now.

 

There, behind the louvered slats
………..warm pumpkin light seeping into your darkness
……………a china plate thrown with love at the window.

Frustrated chef/lover/chauffer only desired
………(aimed) to share (shards) of her new pattern
……………(Americana-Red, discontinued bone) ……..with a fellow homemaker.

 

You are innocent–people
watching only a crime
in neighborhoods without polite
Crime Watch signs. ……….Watch me.

 

(Dangerous) Suburbia. def: ideals of family life transformed
leaving (the city) at night
for the purpose of going to sleep.

 

I walk home alone
……lie beneath a burning maple
………wait for a bad guy
………….to rake me, stuff me in a tall paper sack.